(Shounen-AI) Let Me Show You How

Warning buat yang masih di bawah umur!!! Ini salah satu alasan kenapa pake english.. lumayan aman! Jangan bandel yah yang masih di bawah umur!!! >.<

Title: Let Me Show You How
Author: F
Pairing: Onew/Key
Genre: Fluff
Rating: PG
Warning: Guy kissing a guy
Disclaimer: NO! THESE BOYS AREN’T MINE! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU THIS?? *CRIES*

Summary: Key wanted to help Onew practice his kissing scene.
Author’s Note: This fic is an expression of my frustration upon Onew’s kissing scene in his upcoming musical. Yes, I’m a desperately jealous and heart-broken fangirl. I’d rather you kiss Key all your life, Dubu! >.<
This is my first attempt at fluff and male-male relationship fic. IT FAILS! IT FAILS! I KNOW IT FAILS!
And why the hell did I write an OnKey anyway? They’re not even my OTP! But they’re just too sweet to resist! Noo I’m turning into an OnKey-shipper!

Onew was whacking his head with his script when Key appeared in the room.

“What are you doing? Trying to make yourself sane?” Key asked. Onew stared at him helplessly.

“Why did I say yes? Why, Kibum, Why?”

Onew looked like he was about to cry.

“Say yes to what? What’s that you’ve been hitting your head with?”

Key took the script from Onew’s hand without bothering for his reply. He read the writing on the cover of the script, “Brothers Were Brave”.

“Ya! This is your musical script! How come you didn’t show me this earlier?” Key shouted excitedly.

“Forget it. I’m gonna resign. I can’t do this musical,” Onew chickened out, but Key didn’t listen, because he was too engrossed in quick-scanning Onew’s script.

“What? There’s a kissing scene? Hyung, are you seriously gonna kiss a girl?” Key questioned joyfully, there were sparkles in his eyes. Onew groaned and his face turned red.

“I was really hoping you wouldn’t bring that up,” Onew said as Key laughed hard in his face.

“Hyung! The only thing you’ve ever kissed is a lamb! How in the world are you gonna kiss a real living and breathing girl?

“That’s exactly why I’m gonna fail this musical. Oh, Kibum, what am I supposed to do?” Onew buried his head in his hands.

“Aw, Jinki hyung, don’t be so upset. I’ll help you practice your lines,” Key said brightly.

“You can’t by any chance help me in the kissing department, can you?” Onew asked rhetorically.

“Oh, yes, definitely!”

Silence.

“What did you just say?” Onew asked in disbelief.

“Kissing practice, right? No problem.”

Onew nervously laughed.

“You’re not serious, are you?”

“Ya! Are you doubting my kissing skill?”

Onew’s face violently blushed again.

“No, no, it’s not that, but – but – you’re a.. guy?” Onew said uncertainly.

“So what? It’s acting, right? If you kiss me, then you’ll get a double combo: kissing and acting practice. Sounds fair, right?”

He didn’t know why, but Onew’s heartbeat just increased ten folds.

“I gotta go to the musical rehearsal,” Onew told Kibum hastily and left the room.

———————————-

In the rehearsal room, waiting for the rehearsal to start, Onew unconsciously thought about Key’s offer. Well, for one thing, it would be a shame for SME, SHINee, and himself if his kissing scene failed. To tell you the truth, he really needed that kissing practice. But not with Key, surely? But which girl in her right mind would want to practice kissing with him anyway? But then again, how would it feel it to kiss Key’s lips? Those thin, perfect lips. Those bitchy lips that always said sassy things and…

Onew shook his head. Why was he thinking about Key’s lips anyway?

————————————

“So? How did the practice go?” Key asked Onew when he was back in the dorm.

“Fail,” Onew sighed only to make Key laughed his ass off.

“I knew it!”

“But I managed to kiss the floor,” Onew tried to joke.

“That’s probably because you tripped.”

“Aw, Kibum, why do you always have to be so bitchy?”

Wae? That’s how I am, take it or leave it,” Key said much to his chagrin.

“Come on, I was just kidding. Why aren’t you asleep like the others anyway?”

“Who’s gonna cook you dinner if I were asleep? Here.”

Key shoved a plate of warm dinner to Onew’s lap. Onew ate it eagerly. He was hungry, especially after all those failure in kissing scenes. Onew was too lost in eating dinner, he didn’t realize it when Key nudged closer to him.

“So… Have you reconsidered my offer this afternoon?”

Onew coughed as a spoonful of food got stuck in his throat. Key slapped Onew’s back and hurriedly gave him a glass of water, which Onew drank completely in one go.

“Are you okay?”

Onew was still too shocked to answer Key’s question.

“Gosh, Jinki hyung, relax, it’s just kissing.”

Onew looked at Key in wide eyes.

“Just kissing for you, you kissing expert!”

Key laughed hearing Onew’s reaction everytime he mentioned the word ‘kissing’. Onew couldn’t help thinking how Key’s laugh sounded like a ring of bells.

But then, Key moved forward to him slowly.. slowly.. slowly.. and the next thing he knew, they were face to face. Onew could feel cold sweat was starting to collect on his palms.

“It’s not hard, hyung,” Key whispered.

“Kibum-ah, what are you doing?”

Onew wanted to push Key away, but his hands weren’t listening to him. He was trapped at the corner of the living room couch, desperately looking for somewhere to run to, but his eyes were locked onto Key’s cat-like ones.

“Relax” was the last thing Onew heard when Key put his lips on his. Onew felt a sudden jolt of electricity flowed through his body as Key pushed his lips to his. He felt so helpless, giving in to Key’s rhythm as he nibbled and kissed Onew’s lips softly. Key went to his full lips, then moved to his upper lip, before finally settling down on his lower lip.

For something so soft, Key’s lips were amazingly leading Onew’s ones. Onew could feel his jaw moving in harmony to complete Key’s lips. So this is how it felt like. It was true when people said that kissing was a natural born skill, because even a kissing virgin like Onew could do it in five seconds. Or had it been a minute already?

Onew gasped when Key suddenly opened his mouth and darted his tongue across Onew’s tongue. Key’s tongue kept pushing and pushing, brushing Onew’s lips teasingly and all of it just blew Onew’s mind away. Onew gave in, and now he wanted more.

Key was now the one who gasped as he felt Onew grabbed his cheek and pulled him closer to himself. Onew’s tongue moved hungrily for his tongue and soon their tongues were fighting and clashing passionately. At that second, both of them just lost their minds and they wanted nothing more than to kiss each other all night. But that would mean dying from out of breath. So they eventually stopped and stared at each other while gasping for air. The only sound they could hear was that of them panting and breathing.

“You’re right,” Onew said. “That wasn’t hard. Thank you, expert.”

Key smiled.

“I lied. That was my first kiss too.”

It was Onew’s turn to smile.

“Even better. We can practice kissing together.”

Key was about to reply when Onew sealed his lips again. And they both kissed the night away.

——————————

And now tell me how much I failed!

P.S: This is the first PG FF that published in this blog. Please don’t misunderstand. Onew and Key.. both of them is not a gay. It’s just a fiction story, just for fun. We using English cause of SHINee image.. you know it’s just… aghh.. just read and comment please..

We are shared this, someone send it to us.

52 thoughts on “(Shounen-AI) Let Me Show You How”

  1. Hahahahaiii~~ geliiii dech baca’ny.. ><
    umma n appa…ugh… taq bs d'ungkapkn dgn kt2..
    so hooot~~~… wkkk~~ ;D
    but it isn't real, is it?
    just a fiction???

    1. Kkkk.. aku juga geli.. untungnya pake bahasa inggris jadi gak sengerti kalo pake bahasa Indonesia… kkk
      Of course! It’s only a fiction.. hehehehe…

  2. Just want to say what a great blog you got here!
    I’ve been around for quite a lot of time, but finally decided to show my appreciation of your work!

    Thumbs up, and keep it going!

    Cheers
    Christian, iwspo.net

    1. Thank you very much for your appreciation ^o^
      I’m very glad to see it.. makes me smile… Thank you very much
      I don’t think there’s a reader from other country..
      If you keep reading our blog we will publish FF in english often ^-^

      But… btw.. are you understand what we write? I mean not this FF.. the other FF that using Indonesian..??
      Just want to know.. hhehe..
      Keep reading please and once again..
      Thanks you very much.. ^o^

      XOXO
      (sorry my english is bad… hehe)

    1. Itulah salah satu tujuannya… hohoho

      Annyeong sN.. new reader kah? Atau Old reader new commentator? Nice to know you..

      Hope you want to keep reading and comment… O.O

  3. anneyong~

    new reader,
    hehe, ga sengaja ngeliat wkt lg cari berita baru tntang key..hoho

    nice story..
    fighting for the next story..
    ^-^

  4. Oh my godnessssss!!!! Omonaaaaaaa!!!! My boyyy
    Key and Onew???? K…k..i..i..s..s..s..ssss agh… *melted.. nose bleeding*

  5. Maklum… leader kita emang rada-rada hohohoho…
    Ohh Key.. dari pada nyium Onew mendingan nyium aku… *Key: ngarep lo!*

  6. OMG lg nyari ff onew, nemunya beginian (tp tetep aja dibaca smpe kelarr) kekeke
    aarh kenapa onnyu polos bgt si? si key juga sok sok an pdhal dia jg baru pertama kali dan melakukannya dgn sesama jeruk hahaha *kacau kacau ki saya*
    fortunately, this is just a fiction hoahh. thanks. nice story, hohow

    1. Annyeong Ariesty.. ^.^
      SHINeELF yaaaa… waaahh senangnyaaa
      Keep reading yah.. ^o^
      Masih ada kok FF Onew yang lain.. coba check deh…
      Di tunggu komen-komennya

  7. THIS IS LIKE TOTALLY WIN^^
    I LIKE IT CUTE NATURAL INNOCENT LIKE THIS..YEAH YEAH…PURE STRAIGHT ONEW THAT TURNS TO BE A GHEIII CUZ OF THIS SMEXY KEY..KKKKK
    I LIKE LIKE LIKE IT.,..

  8. HELLO~
    woah an onkey fanfic! ^^
    have you ever posted it on lj onkey eh btw? cos i kinda familiar with this lol.
    but whatever, this uh yeah cool! 8)
    i love the way key’s being ~agressive~ toward onew. LOL.
    thanks for sharing and keep writing 😉

  9. Hello guys~ ^-^
    Thanks guys for coming.. ^o^
    Thank you very much for your appreciation..
    We have 3 FF in english, have you read em all? Maybe you guys want to send your FF too?

    Hemmm… we never send this FF to other blog but the sender of this FF told me that she got it from her friend blog.
    Would you keep reading guys??
    Thanks again

  10. OMG !! I LIKE THIS FIC !! XDD
    good job for u.. kekekekeke.. XDD
    READ MORE about OnKey.. XP
    i like it SO MUCH !! hohohoho

    1. Wahahahahaaa… thank you very much >,<
      kekeke…
      Gak tahu deh kira-kira bakal ada FF Shounen Ai lagi atau gak.. kekeke
      habis jarang ada yg mau baca kalo pake english.. katanya ribet.. ehehehe

  11. Just want to say what a great blog you got here!
    I’ve been around for quite a lot of time, but finally decided to show my appreciation of your work!

    Thumbs up, and keep it going!

    Cheers
    Christian,Earn Free Vouchers / Cash

  12. Annyeong..
    Haha..Lg nyari ff key d sni,eh malah nemuin yg shounen ai*bner ga ya tlisan.y*
    untg ni hanya ff blaka,klw ga mgkn gw bkalan msuk RSJ gra2 liat dueT maut onkey *halah,bhasa gw*kkkk
    tp utg pke bhs.ingg,klw pke indo,wah bsa jd hhaaawwwtt ni ff*duh,kok bhasa gw mkin aneh..*

    ff.y keren kok chingu..plok..plok..plok..^^

  13. OH….MY…GOD…..!!!
    this is seriously awesome.. two thumbs up author!!

    is it okay if i ask more?? =p

    I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE!
    hahha..*kidding

  14. AMPUUUUUNNN!!! baru nyadar! yang ngarang ini kayaknya temen aku deh, **ngaku2*. eh tapi bener deh!

  15. hallo, i’m a new reader in here
    and this post is the first post i read in here

    at the first i laugh when the author says “now i’m turning into an onkey shipper” hahaha LOL
    but i’m onkey shipper too ^^
    i know , i late to read this post, but this FF is really god
    hahahaha.. better if you make hotter.. hahaha *just hoping*
    but i really like your ff ^^
    like this so much…
    i will waiting your onkey’s ff okeeeeyy ❤

  16. omo~~
    umma and appa soo romantic…
    ga kebayangg daahh.. untung ajaa diketik pake bhs inggris.. 😀

  17. OMO!!! I REALLY LIKE IT!! it’s okey! it’s just fiction! but the stupid thing i really want them to be so real. shounen ai i mean. isn’t so dumb right?

    heheheh 😀

    okey forget it, once again, good job author! Nice fanfic!

  18. hell yeah, bb 8D
    this is NOT a fail, no , hell it is not.
    will I be considered as a pervert if i want a sequel from this?? 8D LOL
    nice job ;D ♥♥♥

  19. aigoo….saya ketinggalan~
    biasanya saya pusing baca ff english, tapi yang ini……ngerti sangat!!!
    astaga, bakal dikira kuntiltaemin saya gara2 cekikikan terus
    forget it was an oneshoot ^^”
    hwaiting ^^

  20. Dubu dubu why are you so innocent.
    You are too cute and that’s your charm.
    Oh my….. This fiction really cool anyway.

  21. haha, bagus. Kibum emang bitchy sekali.
    Mana sok2an ngeledek onew padahal dia sendiri belum pernah kissing
    😀

  22. Aku mau muntahh -___-”
    Aku baca sambil ngartiin. hahahhaha….
    Nice ff. But, i think this ff genre must be M
    Maaf pedes, tp bener deh… Begitulah yg aku rasain sehabis baca. Antara bingung dan enek.
    Anyway, mian kalo commentku pedes. pasti nggak ada yg kenal aku ya? #pundung
    Yg blm, lam kenal ya author dan readers” lainnya…

  23. OMG ONKEY! Wow hahaha absolutely, I’m not fujoshi but idk why I love OnKey so much >.<

    Tadi lagi ngesearch Onkey fanfiction on google and….. aku temukan ff ini, this ff was posted about 2years ago o,o

    daebak!

  24. whaha(ngetawain dri sndiri)
    pngen coba bca krna mrasa udh d atas umur, 3 bulan yg lalu»ngga da yg nnya>_<
    pi dgn b.ing d bwah rata" ap mw d kata..
    pi lmayan nngkep c isinya..
    aigoo… appa.. umma..

  25. Memangnya ada yang salah dengan genre ‘shounen-ai’ atau ‘yaoi’ ? Enggak kok. Jadi kalau bikin ff genre itu nggak usah pakek ‘english’ gapapa kali.
    Menurutku enakan baca ff kalau cast nya onew + ‘key’ atau ‘kibum’ dan dia namja, bukannya ‘gweboon’.
    Padahal cerita ini bagus banget kalau aja pake bahasa indonesia yang baik dan benar. Hemm…

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